Review for Harry Potter and the Sun Source

Harry Potter and the Sun Source

(#) Katsuhito 2008-11-13 03:30:21 PM

Great story so far, although this chapter seemed a little.. disjointed maybe? While the scenes themselves were great, the chapter as a whole just seemed to be a bunch of scenes strung together without being really tied together. Sorry I can't really describe it better, but that's why I'm a reader, not a writer. :)

Now that that's out of the way, I really like this story so far. überHarry is well done, and his interactions with other chars is very believable. And his inability (or rather, Tonk's inability) to get past the first few of the 37 steps is quite amusing. I do wish the updates were faster, but for 11k chapters of this quality, it's worth the wait.

So, now the questions that have come up for me: What will Draco and Snape do to regain face? How will the 'Puffs handle a Sinanju (sp?) apprentice in their house - even if they don't know what he is? How will the other professors deal with having to earn a student's respect? How will Dumbles do the same? (I've got more questions, but that's enough for now. ;) )

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