Review for Shades of Gray

Shades of Gray

(#) falcon_phoenix 2008-11-14 03:14:29 PM

good story, like it a lot. Its original and well written. There is a problem though. Its not about the story but you seem to use to many italic words. It just doesn't flow right. but keep up the work and update soon.

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