Review for You Stole My Breath

You Stole My Breath

(#) Life_is_42 2008-11-23 02:41:53 PM

whoa! intenseness and awkward ness (and a protective jon sorta).
I was so happy to see this update!!!! hoorah!!!!!!!

xoxo
Lifey

Author's response

Awkward and Jon trying to be protective, exactly what I was trying to communicate. Cassia is a bit like a fish out of water, for the first time in her life feeling as though she has no control over the situation. It's unsettling. In the next chapter too she's still testing the water, still trying to find her place on the tour, with all her new acquaintances, and even with her best friend who seems to be slipping away just a bit. I'm really going to try to update more. :) Thanks for sticking around!!

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