Review for A day at the mall

A day at the mall

(#) country_girl 2008-11-24 09:16:15 AM

I know that this story is a little old but you have to put in spaces so that we can read it and understand it better!

Its a good story, but all you have to do it make sure that not only make it have a little sense to it but also to have a little bit of coma's and periods!

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