Review for Tea Party

Tea Party

(#) red_jacobson 2008-11-26 05:58:23 AM

Cute story, but a couple of errors with characters names jumped out at me. The characters in question are Daphne (Not Dauphine - which, if memory serves, is the name or title of a French noble during the time of Joan of Arc) and Seamus not Shamus (which is a slang term for a private detective)

Other than that, while the story is fairly derivative of multiple others, it's still a cute story that needs to be expanded, it doesn't really end, as written, it just stops.

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