Review for Summer 4th year Revised

Summer 4th year Revised

(#) jabarber69 2008-11-29

Hey that was bloody brilliant! After reading your story Potters Surprise I figure I would check to see if you had any other stories, and much to my surprise I found one of my favorite hp stories and that is Motorcycle...by the way I sure hope you continue that and soon! but anyway I also found this story, and realizing that I like the way you write and your hp stories and liking the summary to this story I gave it a whirl...right off the bat with the letter from sirius and his portkey to the island and then the part with exercising and coming out of his shell and the hermione and her mum visiting...oh yeah the dancing part was brilliant too, been nice to actually see that, love to watch two couples dancing the tango or what brings to my mind even though it aint the tango is that dance between antonion banderious and catherine zeta jones in the first zorro movie...but to close thank you for a great time reading this!