Review for Talking with Davey

Talking with Davey

(#) Ithilwen 2005-11-23 02:37:02 PM

All the y's got annoying. IMHO, it's better to get speech patterns and accents across with word choice than with phonetic spelling, like when you called them "bities."

All in all, though, this thing is interesting. Can't say I haven't wondered what goes through a deathless man's mind when he's down in the icy black.

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