Review for The Story of the Lost Mews
The Story of the Lost Mews
(#) Shadowbutterfly 2008-12-02 07:37:24 AM
It was good, you could have done a lot more with this story. I liked it, but I found it to be a bit rushed.
For instance, Berri and Ringo's death. Their Mew Mews, so they shouldn't be able to die that easily. Blinded yes, but not dead just like that.
So, just letting you know, keep up the good work. :D
For instance, Berri and Ringo's death. Their Mew Mews, so they shouldn't be able to die that easily. Blinded yes, but not dead just like that.
So, just letting you know, keep up the good work. :D
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