Review for No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e
No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e
(#) Moonshyne 2008-12-06 04:36:39 AM
I like this so far, especially why the bears, that was too cute. I love the friendship between them.
Another suggestion on top of izzibee's quotation marks, makes it easier to know what is conversation and which is thought. You use it a few places, but not all.
I can't wait to read more!!
Another suggestion on top of izzibee's quotation marks, makes it easier to know what is conversation and which is thought. You use it a few places, but not all.
I can't wait to read more!!
Author's response
First thank you for reviewing. Secondly I did do double spaces. I think it loaded funny. So I'll double check that next time. Thanks! :)
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