Review for No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e
Another suggestion on top of izzibee's quotation marks, makes it easier to know what is conversation and which is thought. You use it a few places, but not all.
I can't wait to read more!!
"It's all fallen to hell." Feedback hugely appreciated.
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