I like this so far, especially why the bears, that was too cute. I love the friendship between them.
Another suggestion on top of izzibee's quotation marks, makes it easier to know what is conversation and which is thought. You use it a few places, but not all.
I can't wait to read more!!
Author's response
First thank you for reviewing. Secondly I did do double spaces. I think it loaded funny. So I'll double check that next time. Thanks! :)