Review for No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e

No,I'm not okay,my life's a freaking clich'e

(#) Moonshyne 2008-12-06 04:36:39 AM

I like this so far, especially why the bears, that was too cute. I love the friendship between them.

Another suggestion on top of izzibee's quotation marks, makes it easier to know what is conversation and which is thought. You use it a few places, but not all.

I can't wait to read more!!

Author's response

First thank you for reviewing. Secondly I did do double spaces. I think it loaded funny. So I'll double check that next time. Thanks! :)

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