Review for Harry Potter, The Dark Lord

Harry Potter, The Dark Lord

(#) malaskor 2008-12-09

Nice, but could use a bit more detail/set-up, you just throw a situation at us with the barest of explanations of how it came to be. The story would benefit from some more detail to the plot.

If you want to go for the plot-what-plot angle of porn it needs more porn (well it can use more porn anyway, but without plot even more will be needed :) ).