Review for Third Rescue
(#) Roaming_Fool 2006-08-20 01:26:12 PM
And another big thank you for not having "true wuv conquer all!" once they slept together!
I saw a few things that I might have done differently, but overall, nice job!
I'd be interested in hearing what things you might have done differently. :-) I like to think I'm a craftsperson, and after reading your stories and enjoying them so much, I think you're very good at crafting your ideas too.
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