Review for Winter Warmth
Winter Warmth
(#) Ithilwen 2005-11-23 03:59:03 PM
Hee hee. I can picture Sesshoumaru suddenly figuring out that mortals are affected by the cold. He's just lucky she wasn't awake all night with an evil sniffle.
Heh. Even his misogyny is amusing. I find this a whimsical but believably IC portrayal.
NITS:
"Clothing for a girl child," is part of the previous sentence that includes, "I require." The C in "Clothing" should be lowercase.
Rin would look "good" in fox furs. Looking well would mean that it would improve her vision.
Heh. Even his misogyny is amusing. I find this a whimsical but believably IC portrayal.
NITS:
"Clothing for a girl child," is part of the previous sentence that includes, "I require." The C in "Clothing" should be lowercase.
Rin would look "good" in fox furs. Looking well would mean that it would improve her vision.
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