u kept me uessin throuh the whole story from chapter one..its the best story ive ever read...strike that..the best story ill EVER read..its so good nothin compares to it(even if their are mistakes to others) its perfect in my eyes..and dont rush anything..just take ur time and try to find inpiration and ull have a great next chapter. THE BEST STORY EVER MADE...and im ur number one fan...keep it coming and dont let us rush u...see ya