Oh my god - i just read the whole story..you made me cry, you bitch!
The ending is definately better, but my GOD, was it depressing.
I'm wondering if Frank talked to Gerard at all after the whole shooting fiasco?..
Poor Mikey! Aww, Frank really should have stayed. RAY - DONT PULL THE PLUG. I sympathise with Bob the most though - he was just a complete wee fucking searches for word MUCHKIN - LOVE HIM. Gerard -its so strange - i would have thought that Gerard would have been the one to die, if the ending turned out to be a depressing one. Now he's all alone :'(
I like how the ending was the most pessimistic thing we would have expected, yet completely different to HOW we would have expected it[made no sense]. I mean, for Bob and Frank to die... never would have expected it!
So.. well done! You have me all worked up now! I'm going to go work out or something.. :|