Review for The Face in the Pool

The Face in the Pool

(#) Ianmacian 2008-12-17

Hot damn, you're back!! Yeehaw!!

Great start. I like the way you have Ginny actually being a bit afraid of Harry. Given the point Rowling made about the resemblance between Harry and the young Tom Riddle, I've always been surprised that angle isn't used more often.

I also like Ron's characterization. He's a bit shallow, but what teen isn't? And he's aware of his limitations, and bothered by them to an extent. If he chooses to walk away from Harry, it will actually be a choice, rather than the cliche jealousy reaction.

I'll be eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Wolf