Ah, now it's up.
An interesting start. However, to be honest, I hate FLASHBACK and END FLASHBACK. It's a pet peeve of mine. It's a simple crutch that can be easily avoided by saying "Harry recalled the night where..."
I am curious to see where this story goes.
Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)
Sorry about the flashbacks buuuut the next chapter is now up!