Review for The Wizard's Triad
(#) cloneserpents 2009-01-04 10:58:07 AM
An interesting start. However, to be honest, I hate FLASHBACK and END FLASHBACK. It's a pet peeve of mine. It's a simple crutch that can be easily avoided by saying "Harry recalled the night where..."
I am curious to see where this story goes.
Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)
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