No Way.
It's far from unrealistic, it's the fact that Frank usually is so involved with the fans, and now isn't that shows he is feeling very bad (if that makes sense)
So no, it is fine really :)
I know what you mean, it's really hard to stick to just stories in reviews. Ficwad should create a forum for us to go blog about random stuff and have a bit of a chit-chat.
Cant wait for more :D
dondon xo.
Author's response
Thanks for that, i guess i was just feeling a bit crappy about the story.
I see you're doing the multi story thing, should be a great laugh.