I'm usually such a lazy ass bastard that i don't review (shame on me) btu i really just had to tell you how much i liked this poem. more than liked, but i can't really find the right word.
it was in a way confusing, it was visional, rich in language yet smooth like a poem should be.
and the rawness really got to me, the do me a god damn favor and quit bleeding on the linen - part especially. great work!
Author's response
It was fun to write =) Thank you anyway!