Simply superb Clell!
You outdo yourself once again.
This is, without doubt, my favourite of your stories... no doubt my involvement in martial arts causes this (though I wish it were actually possible to do the things Harry does in this great tale).
Although I deeply respect your policy of cycling your chapters so as to update each story and satisfy all readers, I do think you are onto something brilliantly original here.
I will hope with my fondest hope that you continue this story with the same high level of skill and attention.
Thanks for the work, it's truly inspiring.
J