Review for B.D.P.D.

B.D.P.D.

(#) Lord_Sia 2009-01-13 04:38:41 PM

Nice, I hope you'll continue this. Although I agree, it was much to short to count as a real chapter: you'll probably need flashbacks to flesh out his "path to power" a bit more than that. The Remus-reference has already been pointed out: fix it!
Otherwise, keep up the good work.

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