Review for The Art of Concealment

The Art of Concealment

(#) Kanone 2005-11-26 01:15:41 PM

Everything was very well put together but, Naruto's ending words seemed abit off. He's not one to give up, so I think if he wanted to change things he'd die trying.

I loved how you caugh Naruto at the start. Him begging for a mission is just him.

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