WEll, you've got an attention-grabbing introduction and it looks to be an interesting and different story. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how Harry rescues Lavender, and from what, exactly, and the effects her presence will have on Harry & Ginny.
Author's response
Thanks for leaving a review. The first chapter was mostly setup and things really get moving in the next chapter with Lavender's introduction into the story. Hope it meets your expectations.