Review for Cries of the Suffering

Cries of the Suffering

(#) cloudenstein 2009-01-15

A great start of what could become a
more-than-average story.
Like the two previous reviews, I would like to see more of this in the future.

Also, I congratulate you on the fact that there are very few mistakes in your grammar, but still, it would do good to re-check it from time to time.

Keep on the good work friend.

Let's hope this is not a one-shot ;)