Review for Secret Ritual
That was the best line in the entire story, in my opinion. The way you worded that was simply marvelous. I liked this pairing also, since it was original, and you pulled it off well. You've done a very good job, and your writing is descriptive, and I especially like the metaphors you use. Great work, and I hope to read more from you soon.
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