AAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! XD "You spelled 'Birthday' wrong." Beautiful. Truely a masterpiece of a fanficiton! But I must say... if Axl's voice got any squeakier than it already is... don't you think when he'd sing, he'd really sound like a chipmunk?
SOMEBODY GET THAT DUDE SOME HELIUM!!!
I would pay good money and possibly a few limbs to see a GnR concert with Axl on helium. And the word 'masterpiece' makes me blush =) Thank you so much!