Review for Try to build a fence around the visions

Try to build a fence around the visions

(#) Leah270193 2009-01-18 09:54:51 AM

If any of you are wondering about the strange story name it's actually a line from a david gray song I was listening to. The song is called 'flesh' I think. I really hope this is the final version of this story I've spent ages editing it and trying to make it better. I wouldn't mind bad review ratings in people just told me why they gave me it and how to make it better at least!
But anyway, I'm really grateful people read my stories as I put alot of time and effort into them which in turn helps me to get out a lot of emotion.
And I guess if you are reading this right now thank you soooooooo much for reviewing xxxxxxx

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