Bwaaaar. I absoultely loved this chapter. And how gosh darned scary Madeline is, and how Jon is ambivalent to all of it and just showers her with love and affection. I am really looking forward to see how you write their relationship.
And speaking of relationships...
.......Riolet. :)
Beautiful as always, I am going to force you into urrying up on the next chapter. Hop to it.
Author's response
Writing Jon and Madeline made me happy. I really enjoy the two characters, and their relationship. It was fun and I'll be looking forward to writing more of them in future chapters. :]
Riolet. Clever name, there. :]
And I'll be try writing the next chapter as soon as possible. :]
Thank you for the review!