Since you reviewed one of my story’s I thought I’d return the favour!
This story was adorable and so romantic, it made me smile. I wish my love life was as perfect as Mikey and Liz’s. Well done! On a more serious note I think you moved the story along on a really nice pace. The chapters were short but not so short that they didn’t have any description or lacked emotion in them. So you did excellent at the whole pace thing!
I really liked the little love sex scene between Mikey and Liz too. It was very hot; I can never get mine that good. Go you, keep on writing!!!
Author's response
wow, thank you so much lol. That was a really nice review. I love you're stories, I can't wait to read more.