oh my God! poor Jill!
really well written, it got me emotional!
can't wait for more. thanks so much for updating!
i have run out of ratings points! there are too many good stories around at the moment! which is a good thing, but all my points have gone!
sorry bout that.
Author's response
Don't worry about the ratings points lol. Thanks for leaving such a nice review. I'm working on the next update :)