Good work so far. Keep it up. The rapore (I don't think that's how you spell it; it might not even be n American word, but it means interchange or interplay) you have going between Harry and Hestia is definitely intriguing, as is the way you portray Harry. I can't wait to read the next chapter; I'm wondering what the delayed reaction form Ginny will be and what she will think Harry was up to. I also look forward to reading about Lavender's reaction.
Keep up the good work
Concealed-Convict