Review for Crap-tacular rough draft for DLP people to laugh at.
Crap-tacular rough draft for DLP people to laugh at.
(#) LabRat 2009-02-03 11:32:25 AM
The hell with the warning, this was nice. I most definitely like where this is going, because it has a bit of humor too. I'd like to disagree with Siaru on the Voldemort being amped for battle thing. The Potters had no idea he was even there until he blew the door off the hinges, so I doubt he was expecting a battle, just a simple hit and run. Besides, no one but him knew about the attack, so he wouldn't have been all that aware of someone waiting to ambush him. He got caught by surprise, and that was all it took.
Author's response
Well thank you! I've had about five reviews come out of the wood work today, so I'm sorry I've taken so long to respond. I'm up to chapter twelve now and I think I'll post the rest here, now that I remember I have an account here!
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