Review for keeping a secret from you...

keeping a secret from you...

(#) Fantasy_Fairy 2009-02-03

OK, so i think this story is quite good, but you really need to work on your spg. Like, i dont mean to sound condascending, but you need to start a sentence with a capital letter.
Asides from the short chapters and the plot, which really has a lot of unused potential, it would be cool for you to update :)