Review for The shortest Severitus story ever
Hm... The ending could be stronger. Perhaps if Dumbledore's tracker were a bit more like Mrs. Weasley's clock, and we got a more vivid message than a "large amount of pain." Perhaps something like, "being squished by Gringotts vault," or "being squished into lunch for Gringotts Goblin Cafeteria." Heh heh.
One turns over a "new leaf," but one gets a "new lease" on life.
Did Lily "confine with" Dumbledore or "confide in" him?
A year or so after the Battle of Hogwarts, Harry realizes his life isn’t exactly making him happy....
In: Harry Potter
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A not-so-creepy creepypasta for Jazzy. Enjoy :3
Kiss me while I shoot the bad guys, and this rainy day can last forever.
Abigail 14 runs away from the orphanage becuse she believes that she'll never find a family who love...
In: G.I. Joe
Sequel to "Answer" (Fluffy domestic bickering some time after the wedding. (Dialogue only.)...)
I really need help cheering up. I am crying out a waterfall.