Review for The shortest Severitus story ever
Hm... The ending could be stronger. Perhaps if Dumbledore's tracker were a bit more like Mrs. Weasley's clock, and we got a more vivid message than a "large amount of pain." Perhaps something like, "being squished by Gringotts vault," or "being squished into lunch for Gringotts Goblin Cafeteria." Heh heh.
One turns over a "new leaf," but one gets a "new lease" on life.
Did Lily "confine with" Dumbledore or "confide in" him?
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While Goten, Gohan and Trunks were forced to train with Vegeta in the Gravity Chamber, Pan was left ...
In: Dragon Ball Z
They give her a new lease of life, now she owes them
Where do you want to go to? Heaven? Or maybe Hell? Make your choice.
It's our life. We make our own decisions and sometie our own path.