Review for The Beastly Beauty

The Beastly Beauty

(#) Aelfwine 2009-02-09

Nicely done.

The teasing with Hestia was charming, and I thought Farfalla was quite compelling. I'm wondering if she'll have more of a role in future chapters.

Glad to see that Lavender's home safe with Harry and Ginny now. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

What sort of "creature" exactly is she? I was surprised that she wasn't caged with the werewolves--I'd assumed after the first chapter that she'd been infected by Fenrir Greyback during the Battle for Hogwarts.

Not that I mind being deceived, of course--that's part of writing, sometimes. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.