Review for MY BUNNY HUTCH

MY BUNNY HUTCH

(#) Visible_minority 2009-02-13 12:40:41 PM

The rant started to get a little irrational towards the end there. Other than that, and the fact that his death should have been faked somehow, it was really good.

Author's response

Yeah, he got a Lottie overdone there, but Harry has decided he has had it with them all. I figure he's due to blow off some steam.

I thought of the faking his death, But quite honestly, Harry isn't that cunning. He leads with his heart, which plays right into Dumblemort's hands.


Glad you enjoyed the story. Alorkin

Yeah, he got a Lottie overdone there, but Harry has decided he has had it with them all. I figure he's due to blow off some steam.

I thought of the faking his death, But quite honestly, Harry isn't that cunning. He leads with his heart, which plays right into Dumblemort's hands.


Glad you enjoyed the story. Alorkin

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