Review for back in time
back in time
(#) hashbrown 2009-02-15 06:05:24 PM
This story has a really great story line. It's just a little illeterate and sort of confuses the readers a bit and the formatting is confusing.
Perhaps put it through a spell check?
Really good story though, I'm not saying it's bad.
Perhaps put it through a spell check?
Really good story though, I'm not saying it's bad.
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