Review for back in time

back in time

(#) hashbrown 2009-02-15 06:05:24 PM

This story has a really great story line. It's just a little illeterate and sort of confuses the readers a bit and the formatting is confusing.

Perhaps put it through a spell check?

Really good story though, I'm not saying it's bad.

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