Review for back in time

back in time

(#) disturbedangel6 2009-02-16 12:41:47 AM

Yea I agree, it's a great story line and I want to read more
But perhaps not explain the story as if you're talking to your friend about it... you know child-like...
And of course the whole spell check too
Perhaps a thesaurus lol
Update soonxx

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