ohhhh drama, i liked the way you built up this chapter. So exciting and poor Frank, i just want to jump in there and help them. I liked the way you built in the humour in such a sad story, it worked really well and you're also showing how it is affecting the other members of the band. Hope MCR find out about the drug pushing support band.
Author's response
It's a bit of a journey this one for Frank and the other guys. I hope i can do it justice. Thanks so much for reviewing.