ooo I really like this story, Sassy! And C says you never read comic books, but I think your pacing of the story is very comic-book-esque! But then again, I think you are a superb writer =)
Author's response
Thank you!! You're far too kind! :)
I have actually started reading comic books in the last few weeks. Haven't read much as yet - Apocalypse Suite, half a Sandman, started Watchmen and some stuff that Alan Moore wrote for 2000AD which I was a BIG fan of as a kid. Getting quite into it now! :D
Glad you're enjoying it!
Sas x