Review for My last breath

My last breath

(#) Trinda 2006-08-25 07:25:12 PM

SO SAD!

Made me cry, I just can't imagine Delilah without Julius, too sad for me.

You did a good job with it, I loved the story and the last breath being used to talk to Julius kinda thing. It was orginal.

Author's response

Thank you, I surprised myself, since it turned out more sad than expected. And indeed, what's D without J?

The idea suddenly sprang in my mind, some days back, while I was listening to the song in the car. I'm very happy you liked it. Thanks again!

Ciao! xxx Tisia

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