Review for My last breath

My last breath

(#) gucci84 2006-08-26 10:19:08 AM

I hate sad endings man. I'll pretend it was all a joke and she sat up throwing confetti everywhere. But otherwise, you described all the feelings really well. Your writting is really good!


Author's response

I hate them to, but no matter how hard I tried, I couldn't think of a happy ending, matching the song... And even if I could find something that would match the lyrics, then a happy ending wouldn't quite fit the song itself.

And thank you. You are one of the writers of this site I valuable the most, and receiving such positive commentary from you... It makes it worth to write more!

Thanks. Really.

Ciao! xxx Tisia

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