Review for Unknown Memories

Unknown Memories

(#) AnnF 2009-03-13 01:29:20 AM

"keep telling Molly"

Percy calling his mother Molly would be very odd. Mother would work. Also it would be a bit better if he mentioned instilling a work ethic or something like that. As it is it sounds like chores make good parents.

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