/“Tripped and hit your face?” He asks skeptically, but his hand falls to his side. There’s a moment of slightly awkward silence like there always is when you lie and it’s obvious.
“So…” Frankie says, and his normal excitement comes back. “Wanna meet some of the people who aren’t assholes?”/
Hmm...this was really interesting, I'm partially wondering if he's going to confront her about it later or if he's going to just be like "Whatever, if you don't want to tell me about what’s going on, then that's your own business.”
So, she thinks Mikey's pretty cool huh? He really does seem to have an admiration for Gerard, and I think that’s great that you added that in there. I really liked how she was standing up for him when he got tripped...that was pretty cool of her...
I love Evangeline by the way. She’s going through a lot at home and stuff, but She still stands up for herself and for other people too. She’s not afraid of what other people think about her either…I think that she’s going to fit in with the rest of the “band” too.
So Gerard really doesn’t think that he’s a good artist...I really like how Gerard is characterized in this story. I have this feeling that he is kind of like the silent “older brother” type figure, from what you’ve said so far. And he has a girlfriend! She seems pretty cool actually. I can't wait to hear more about that.
But I have a question. Well actually two. Did she seriously not know that Mikey was in her class this whole time? I guess she spaces out a lot or something, Idk, lol. And is there gonna be any Frerard in this? Sorry, I’m just wondering, ‘cause I’m just getting tired of reading stories that are all about sex…I mean, in my opinion there has to be a plot too, if you want to keep the story interesting, you know?
Haha, sorry for the way to long review, I just really like this story a lot, and I’ve got some time to type (Well more like text it into my phone, but same diff.) all of this up while I’m at church, lol.
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next update.
Update soon!
Xo-Izzzibee