Review for Peace of Mind

Peace of Mind

(#) LadyKnightKeladry 2009-03-16 03:35:32 PM

I like it. It sets a good tone and I can kind of see Harry doing that though you never explained why Hermione was that angry in the first place. I mean, yes, I get that it was after a DE attack but he could have been captured and didn't want to think about it. I think you should elaborate more in the beginning if you're going to edit.

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