Review for My last breath
My last breath
(#) vaiwandil 2006-08-26 04:53:10 PM
that was awesome! thank you for that story. It's not very comforting but moving and captivating.
but I got angry at one point: doctors and not even recognise belladonna? Hell this world is full of blockheads making the others suffer!
the song fitted in so well! sad but not slushy or something like that. great work!
but I got angry at one point: doctors and not even recognise belladonna? Hell this world is full of blockheads making the others suffer!
the song fitted in so well! sad but not slushy or something like that. great work!
Author's response
Thanks! I know it wasn't really... real, but it was the first thing that sprung in my mind. And I always follow my first thought :-D. My explanation to make it sound reasonable: it is to easy. When you say 'poison' to me, I say 'Belladonna'. So, when it's that easy, doctors might not think about it?
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Stupid explanation, but I was tired, okay? ;-)
Anyway, thank you very much for reviewing so positive, you really cheered me up in a time when it was needed!
Ciao! xxx Tisia
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Stupid explanation, but I was tired, okay? ;-)
Anyway, thank you very much for reviewing so positive, you really cheered me up in a time when it was needed!
Ciao! xxx Tisia
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