Very interesting. I think I've seen one or two other Trek crossovers but this is the first one with TOS.
At this point Harry's personality should lead him to Starfleet Academy.
One thing though... since this is 250 years in the future, I take it Voldemort isn't around? Or is it more along the lines of "he's not worth worrying about."
Last thought for the moment... personally I'd like to keep Harry on the Enterprise for a bit longer if you can. Please though, don't turn him into a Wesley Crusher.
Author's response
Nope no Crusherization for Harry. Your on the right track for the Academy. As for Voldemort, don't worry, ol' snakeface will be addressed in the future.
Rob