Review for You Stole My Breath
(#) TheBestFrigginShoes 2009-04-11 01:29:26 PM
This is the first J-Walk fic I have ever read, that I've actually liked. You use just the right amount of description and create wonderful images.
You're a good writer. Keep up the good work!
Boone is full of bitterness and hero-worship. Jack doesn't notice. (Jack/Boone)
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Important message in chapter four. Please read it.
Yes, yes, auditions. Note added.
More auditions. Haven't done this in a while. Notes added.
Could you walk away from everything you know? Start again with a dangerous stranger? Could I do it? ...
"So you're like, my bitch now?" :FRERARD: