Review for Losing you

Losing you

(#) figilio_vampiri 2009-04-14 07:43:06 PM

I didn't love it, I think a death is hard to write about and capture the emotion without making it weak, but I did like it. Actually, I think what left me disappointed was the length. I felt as if you could have expanded it out a bit more and shown more of the grief. It just seemed to slip a little to fast from the news to the funeral to the healing that comes with the song.

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