Review for I Want Out
I Want Out
(#) JBern 2006-08-28 09:33:51 AM
Still enjoying the story. The fight seemed like it was missing something, but as you continue to write it will get better and do continue to write. It will be interesting to see the dynamic between the Harry and Bella develop. Best of luck continuing.
Jim
Jim
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Thanks :) Missing what? I'm always willing to accept suggestions/criticism. :) It can only help :)
Chris
Chris
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