Review for The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

(#) grookill 2009-04-30

Wowser! So that explains why Harry can't find a magical civilization on Earth. I was hypothesizing that magical folks left Earth but, DANG! I wasn't expecting this.

In a way, you've hit one of my peeves about the ST Universe - what did happen after Col. Green and the Eugenic Wars? We know a bit about about the first conflict but not much else. Oh, well. Maybe the new movie and sequels will touch on that piece of ST lore.

The letter ought to be interesting and would probably tug at Harry's heartstrings. If you haven't written it yet - good luck. You're probably going to need it.

Now I'm wondering about the future of this story. I'm torn between "how does Harry finally get the Voldemort monkey off his back" or "does Harry rebuild the magical world, and if so, how?" Although the Voldemort issue would have to be resolved, the question is whether it is a major focus of the story or not.

I think both tracks would be fun to read. Right now I'm more interested in the "Harry in Star Trek" rather than "Harry vs Voldemort in the Star Trek Universe". Does that make sense?

I (and probably every other reader as well) hope to see the next chapter soon.


Author's response

Ahhh, now your hit on an idea that I had when I started this whole thing. I'll be taking care of this issue in what I hope will be a unique and interesting way. Keep reading and reviewing. I hope that you'll be pleasantly surprised.